Monday, October 24, 2011

We Journal Comments

Comment #1: (On Andrew's Blog)
     "  I like how you talked about the burning cheeks, I talked about that also, and had the same idea about "destruction" and inner struggle. and destruction of a society.We should probably be tracking the thoughts of "burning" or destruction. One thing you said that I hadn't thought about was the "knowledge barriers in society" and I think that's an interesting point how everyone has one specific job, like he's just a mathematician so he doesn't know about anything else. that would be an interesting thing to track as well."

Comment #2: ( On Jack's Blog)
"One thing that's interesting is you must have a different translation of the book. In my book, it does not say "wild, primitive curve..." it says "taming a wild zig zag along a tangent...". They are obviously similar but it's interesting the different connotations with zigzag versus primitive curve. Especially since mine says nothing about being "primitive". Also, I thought it was interesting how you said that it made a serious mood because I had actually thought that he sounded very content and enthusiastic about his writing and that it wasn't very dark in this particular passage. We should probably track how the tone/mood shifts throughout the book."

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